Persuasive Writing

We finished out persuasive writing unit by visiting the website artisancam and using the picture book maker. We made picture books that gave the animals point of view about living in a zoo.



We also looked again at our point of view chart. Everybody gave a brilliant speech in which they tried to persuade people to agree with them and then people had to decide whether they had changed their minds or not. Here is the final chart.


Quite a few people had changed their views on zoos after studying them over the past two weeks and more people are now in support of animals living in zoos.

What do you think? Were you one of the people who changed their mind or did your opinion stay the same? Why not post a comment to say what you think.

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Kacey
    Feb 09, 2013 @ 19:26:00

    I loved doing the fantastic persasive picture book about the zoo. They were all fasanting how so many good points to be for or against zoos.


  2. pandorababe2002
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 16:58:56

    wow amazing blog not been on in well feels like years hi miss Devoil its Lauren Nanda. I was with you in year 5


  3. Maya
    Feb 23, 2013 @ 21:02:30

    When we did this I agreed that animals should be kept in zoos but so many people came up with fantastic points at the end I put myself on don’t know


  4. Hannah
    Mar 03, 2013 @ 18:42:31

    At the start of the week i put my postit note on Agree, at the end of the week i thought that the people that gave the Disagreement speeches were really good so i changed mine to disagree. I think animals being kept in zoos is not nice!! 🙂


  5. Kacey
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 21:58:02

    It was so hard picking what to put the postit on because there were so many good points xxx


  6. jacob
    Apr 16, 2013 @ 02:50:50

    we like your blog and we are from dunedin nz st clair school room 9 jimi and jacobm


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