More Minotaur descriptions

The Minotaur

The Minotaur is a hideous creature. It eats living people because it thinks they are delicious.  People are scared of the Minotaur because it is going to eat them whole. Silently the minotaur  lays waiting for his prey. The Minotaur is a mysterious creature that lives under ground in a deep, dark, damp cave.   The Minotaur is half bull and half human.    He is big and strong and nobody can ever defeat the minotaur but Theseus can because he is strong. He fought the minotaur with his bare hands. 

                                                       by Ayisha


The Minotaur 

The Minotaur has glowing eyes as red as blood.

Silently the beast moves as quickly as a flash with his dark brown stomping hooves. The Minotaur is a prisoner to King Minos of Crete. He feeds on human flesh to survive.

 Although the Labyrinth is a dark, mysterious maze winding in different directions , he is still always kept in there. King Minos placed the maze underneath the palace of his to keep safe. The twisting turning maze walls are so damp it’s like water has been thrown all over them. It is pitch black down in the Labyrinth. In the Labyrinth the floor boards are wooden and every time you walk on them they give out a squeak and give you splinters.

  by Chloe and Maya


The massive minotaur  ! !!

 Secretly the minotaur hides waiting for his prey. The minotaur is half bull half man. He is trapped in a dark spooky labyrinth and he has nothing to eat except human flesh. The minotaur has all purple spikes on his back.

He has a really ugly face. He has really dirty feet and he has a really fat tummy but he only eats once a year. He never has a wash and he doesn’t have any clothes.

 The labyrinth is a really dark and spooky place.Water drips from the ceiling and there is lots of mould on the ceiling.    

                                                                             by Jim



19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chloe
    Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:06:21

    All of our descriptions where good mine and maya’s is up there but we all had fun and that’s the main point


  2. Lachie
    Nov 25, 2012 @ 22:20:40

    Hi 5JdV,
    Great descriptions of the ‘Minotaur!’
    I certainly wouldn’t want to run in to him.
    Do you know why he was imprisoned in the labyrinth?
    From Lachie


  3. Abdulhadi
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:58:27

    Wow. You have used good description. I liked it. Well done!


  4. siraaj
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:58:41

    The way you said that he had purple spikes on his back reminded my of the story of the Gruffalo. He also has purple spikes on his back.


  5. Muhammad
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:59:19

    HI there 5JDV loving the description I would never want to run into him. Do you know why he was imprisoned there ? i certanly don’t.


  6. shifa
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:00:02

    That’s AMAZING! Great job Chloe and Maya. I love the description you have used.


  7. Uways
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:07:59

    I like your story because it had Great description of the Minotaur!


  8. Sam
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 23:32:42

    Hi guys,
    It’s Sam from N.G.P.S. I remember doing work on Greek gods and monster. We had to do a project and I did Zeus king of the gods.
    Kind regards Sam


  9. Nick
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 23:50:31

    Hello my name is Nick from N.G.P.S
    Your discription of the minotor are fantastic. I would be scared of him aswell if I sore him and he was going to eat me.


  10. megan
    Dec 04, 2012 @ 18:32:10

    hi i love your discriptions of the minotors. i think that they are all fantastic!!!


  11. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 19:11:11

    You are really good at thinking of ways to describe the minotaur. I would’nt like to bump into this monster. Well done.
    From Holly:)


  12. Holly.f
    Dec 14, 2012 @ 17:30:12

    I really enjoyed reading your description pravo pravo awesome work Ayisha.


  13. Charlie Needham
    Dec 17, 2012 @ 18:47:57

    I think they are all amazing


  14. amani
    Dec 20, 2012 @ 13:41:27

    Really creative.


  15. Jack
    Jun 11, 2013 @ 13:02:09

    Very creative


  16. mrsslater
    Nov 10, 2013 @ 13:53:27

    i love them there very creative!


  17. Fathima
    Jan 14, 2015 @ 21:51:09

    Very nice description! Helped my son a lot with his homework, well done!


  18. CHLOE
    Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:18:21

    my teacher was so happy because of


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