The Minotaur

We have been reading different versions of the legend of Theseus and the Minotaur. Today we wrote descriptions of the minotaur. We tried to use descriptive language to make our writing more interesting.

The minotaur by Livvy and Rachel

The Minotaur

He sits and waits for his prey to come. Down in the pitch black, misty labyrinth he shows off his teeth like a sharp sword. His thick horns curl towards his demon eyes.

The eyes of the Minotaur glow dark red. His feet are as fat as a train. The hands are dark brown with a little bit of light brown in the middle. The hands are also spiky like the ends of a brush. On his hands he has lots of claws on the ends of his finger tips.  


2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. becky
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 17:06:04

    Hi 5jdv
    I absouloutly loved it me and pheobe thought really hard and we done it and finnaly it has gone on the blog WELL DONE EVERYONE, BRILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    From Becky please reply soon


  2. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 19:34:12

    Hi Livvy and Rachel i really liked your Minotaur description because you have really made me now know what you think the minotaur looks like in your head. You Deserve a BIG WELL DONE and Brillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll work c u soon.


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