The Minotaur by Thomas and Taylor

The Minotaur!!!!!!

The Minotaur is a huge monster. He is half bull and half human. His horns are super sharp and super smooth on the sides of them. He lives in a giant labyrinth full of dead ends and trap doors. Its fur is brown and black but is also very soft. He eats human flesh and meat of other animals. The labyrinth, where the beast lives, is the darkest place on the face of the Earth. His eyes are the colour of the red raging flame of fiery hotness. His horns are like the colour of our teeth so they are yellowish white because they are never cleaned. Even though he can not see in all of that darkness he still can hear the slightest sound of peoples foot steps trembling closer and closer getting ready for the Minotaur to eat them.

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mahfuuz
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:57:42

    Your minotaur description was alright. Please can you put a bit more adjectives.


  2. Sajidah
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:57:47

    Hi, my name is Sajidah. I’m from Mayflower Primary School. I think you’re description is truly wonderful. It is punctuated and described well. Keep up the good work! 🙂


  3. jameelah
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:59:51

    It is lovely. I think you have done a great job.


  4. Sumayah
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:00:41

    WOW!!! That is a graet peice of writing! I liked the description,”His horns are super smooth on the sides of them.


  5. ahmed
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:05:20

    WOW! I love your discription you used wow words intersting i just want to read on .


  6. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 15:49:39

    You have done a really good job at this. You made just want to read more and more. hope reply ASAP.
    fROM hOLLY.F


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