The minotaur by James


 The Minotaur is as furry as a giant bear.  The creature has eyes as red as blood that can stare at you all the while. It has razor sharp teeth that can send venom out in a flash.  He can hear up to a mile away. He can smell and taste his delicious prey from all around the utter dark Labyrinth. Although the Minotaur can’t run he can crawl and charge at the speed of light. He feeds on human flesh to survive.

The Labyrinth is a maze of  directions that he is kept in. Although the Labyrinth is a dark ,mysterious place it still has light shining through from above. 

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ben
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 17:32:12

    I really like yours james not because yours is the first one we all see but because it describes the minotaur immensivly well. I like the sentence where you describe the eyes as red as blood. this is easly by far the best in my opinion.
    Very well done.
    From Ben Potts


  2. Kacey
    Nov 17, 2012 @ 08:49:52

    I love your Minotaur discription.
    You have put really good detail in
    And it’s really good.
    From kacey !!!


  3. Bianca
    Nov 22, 2012 @ 04:00:15

    Hi James,
    I’m Bianca from NGPS. Your Minotaur description is amazing! I love that sentence where it says: “The creature has eyes as red as blood that can stare at you all the while”.

    I just want to say something about the Minotaur. In Australia (and maybe many other places), there’s a game/anime goods store called Minotaur so when I read the topic I thought it was about the store! oops.


  4. lauren and harriet
    Nov 26, 2012 @ 14:17:27

    We would be scared of the Minotaur fab description


  5. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 14:40:35

    HI James your Minotaur description is really good i like it. The bit i like the most about your description is the way you have thought about the words you have used. You have got good similies and good words.See ya soon bye.

    from holly.


  6. Jade
    Dec 19, 2012 @ 22:38:52

    Its Jade here I think your description of the Minotaur was really good and now I am surely going to watch out when I go to parks with giant mazes in them!
    Great job!


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