The Minotaur by Becky and Phoebe

The Minotaur  

The Minotaur lives in a dark dull maze waiting for his prey to come and he is dark brown and covered in fur. His eyes are red, mean and terrifying. His horns are sharper then a knife but stronger than a elephant. The claws are long and black and very dirty and UGLY! He can run as fast as a cheater with out making a single noise. The Montour’s   muscles are big and lumpy and very round. The creepy maze he lives in is covered in  bones and blood but also spider webs. When his prey comes in, he gobbles them up all at once. His belly is so big that he can not fit anymore slaves in. He is so old that he has wrinkles on his face and all around his body, he does not like it at all. He feels really sad and angry because he is lonely and roars so quitely that no one would hear him and he misses his family too much.

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ben potts
    Nov 23, 2012 @ 20:41:18

    Yours is one of the best. You really describe where he lives and what he does when people read this great description there gonna think what a good peace of work this is although I do say myself. Poor Minotaur, missing his family. My favourite sentence is his horns are…….. And so on. Once again great peace of work
    Well done Becky and Phoebe
    Oh one thing I forgot to tell you
    How do you come up with them good ideas you know in class?
    this is great well done
    From Ben Potts


    • Becky
      Dec 10, 2012 @ 15:51:12

      HI Ben
      Thank you about your comment you are really nice.
      I wonder what yours would be like i bet it would be BRILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      FROM Becky


  2. Sumayah
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:58:20

    Your work is amazing! I especially liked the description about the minotaur when it said,”His horns are sharper than a knife but stronger than an elephant.”Well done!:)


  3. muzaynah
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:58:48

    I really like your writing. It was fabulous. Your writing is better than mine. It was extreamly good.


  4. nimra
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:06:38

    You have really described the minotaur and the place he lives in. Anyone who would read this would be able to imagine the minotaur by the way you have described it:).


  5. Aamarah
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 11:01:40

    I think that you have really discribed how the minotaur looks.I really did`t know anything about a minotaur but know I do thanks to your writing.


  6. Sean
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 23:12:48

    You really described the where the Minotaur lives and how he looks. You did really good.
    From Sean please reply ASAP


  7. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 15:25:56

    Hi this is a good piece of work you have done i like the way you have thought about what the Minotaur looks like and how he feels.You have done areally good description.


  8. kira yates
    Dec 08, 2012 @ 21:32:45

    Your poem about the minotaur is so brilliant how did you think about your ideas.
    Its amazing how you did them because i did that once and didnt work out so good .did Becky think of the ideas or did Pheobe think of the ideas or did both of you do it.I really like it i can’t stop thinking about itIt’s so good>

    From Kira YATES glen hills primary school.


  9. Becky
    Jul 21, 2013 @ 07:56:21

    Thank you everyone who has commented on mine and Pheobe’s
    Minotaur discription !! 😄
    From Becky


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