The Minotaur by Aiden

The Minotaur

The Minotaur is a fierce creature who lives in a huge underground maze.

He eats human flesh and his prey have a slow and painful death.                                                  

He will take one charge and your ribs will break.

He has teeth as big as a knife and claws as sharp as razorblades and his horns are as pointy as a spear.

His nose can sniff some one from miles away.

His eye sight is very poor his hearing could hear the slightest sound or foot step. He is big hairy and scary and will eat any living creature from a mouse to a bear his roar is as loud as 100 lions roaring.

He smells as bad as hundreds of garbage cans and he is as hairy as a bear.

20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. umar
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 13:36:15

    Wow that is a really good description of the minotaur, I like the bit where you said that he could roar as loud as a 100 lions!


  2. Mussa
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 13:39:32

    I realy liked it when you rote He will take one charge and your ribs will break…………..


  3. Maryam
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 13:40:26

    WOW!! I really loved your description on the Minotaur. Well Done!


  4. Maryam
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 13:40:51



  5. Muhammad
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:54:13

    I like your blog it has many adjectives and you have described the minotaur very well. Well done!


  6. Bilal
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:54:20

    This is a great description and you have got some fantastic similies!


  7. siraaj
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:54:36

    I really liked the way you described the minotaur by saying that if he charges you once, your ribs will break. I was really scared. Keep up the good work.


  8. shifa
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:54:41

    wow!Aiden that is fantastic i love the description you have used.Great job!


  9. jasmin
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:55:03

    I like you minotaur, it has good discription.


  10. asifa
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:55:17

    I LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing Becky and Phoeby!

    I thinkyou can improve by using more adjectives.


  11. Muhammad
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:55:42

    I like your blog and you have described the minotaur very well. Well done!


  12. Umarfarukh
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:57:15

    Nice story, I really enjoyed it how you described the minatour


  13. Randeep
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 14:58:48

    You described the minotaur very well. Also you have put alot of punctuation.


  14. Umarfarukh
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:00:33

    Nice story!I really enjoyed your describtion about the minatour.


  15. muhammad
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:06:46

    I like what you have said and i dont think you need to change any thing wellDONE


  16. Mahad
    Nov 28, 2012 @ 15:09:45

    I like your story because it was interesting


  17. Holly.f
    Dec 07, 2012 @ 15:03:59

    Hi Aiden that was one AMAZING description.You don’t need to change anything about that. You have really thought about what you have put. This is a very big WELL DONE. HOPE to catch up with you soon Bye.

    from holly.f


  18. Becky
    Dec 10, 2012 @ 15:53:44

    Hi Aiden
    yours is AMAZING it is probley the BEST OF THEM don’t think that it is rubbish.
    From Becky


  19. Faizan
    Dec 20, 2012 @ 13:34:07

    That was a amazing description of the Minotaur well done.


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