The Olympic Torch
8000 holes designed on the torch
for 8000 bearers
who will hold and carry every original
The golden aluminium gleams in the burning sun
As the bearers carry each torch
It must be a pleasure for all of them
Whatever the weather they still run
Getting encouraged by everyone
No plodding. Non stop they will finish their relay run
The crisp flame flickers above this stunning design
Bright colours from the flame create a lovely picture
Red, yellow and orange all combine
The 3rd time the olympics have come to London
The relay will finish in the olympic stadium
And the games will begin!
By Josh
The Olympic Torch
Bright flames passed on from torch to torch
Gleaming, dazzling, sparkling like gold
Shimmering in the midday sun
8000 bearers, 8000 holes for one torch
It’s like a golden arm
With burning fingers
People cheering on for the torch and runner
With pounding hearts, they run for miles
Specially chosen to run and run
by Erin K
Jul 02, 2012 @ 18:51:02
Fantastic poems Josh and Erin, you have used some great vocabulary…..are you sure you’re year 5?!
Jul 02, 2012 @ 20:33:12
I liked Erins poem. Even though it’s short its managed to fit loads in.
Jul 03, 2012 @ 20:36:33
thank you for all the things learned from here and congratulations for the good work.http://www.impressorashp.org
Jul 09, 2012 @ 10:48:42
this is so cool!
Jul 10, 2012 @ 15:24:44
I really liked Ebony’s torch poem because you get a really good image in your head.