Here are some more of our Shape poems.
If I were a shape by Cerys
If I were a shape
I’d be a circle
I’d be a clock ticking away the minutes of the day
I’d be a fan blowing cold air around the room
I’d be a ball rolling down the hill
If I were a circle
I’d be a rectangle
I’d be a table with food on it
I’d be a curtain hanging down the wall
I’d be a book flicking through the pages
If I were a rectangle
But if I were a star
I’d be Rhianna
If I were a shape by Anotida
If I were a shape
I’d be a sphere
I’d be a world cup football when South Africa always win
I’d be a big fat everlasting orange
I’d be a cone
I’d be a delicious melting giant ice cream
I’d be a snow mans coldest carrot nose
But if I were a star
I’d be Akai
The best street dancer
If I was a shape by Layton
I’d be a circle
Id’ be a scrumptious donut covered in sugar
I’d be a shiny new car wheel on a ferrari
I’d be a Bay Blade spinning in a shiny new stadium
But……..
If I were a star
I’d be Justin Bieber
If I were a shape by Cade
If I were a shape
I would be a cube
I’d be a shiny golden treasure box
containing precious jewels
I’d be cardboard box holding a new television
I’d be a red rattling box of Maltesers
disappearing down my tummy
I’d be an RAF lunch box with a chicken sandwich
and a bacon wrap with double bacon coated with macaroni cheese
But If I was a star
I’d be Tom Cruise
in the film Top Gun
If I were a shape by Owen
If I were a shape
I’d be a rectangle
I’d be a computer flashing lights on and off
I’d be a projector shining light low and high
I’d be an old T.V that only has one channel
I’d be lots of booming speakers
If I were a shape
I’d be a circle
I’d be a electric motor going round and round
I’d be a sun burning people
I’d be a clock ticking away
I’d be the world with lots of little people
walking in me
But if I was a star
I’d be Bruno Mars
Feb 08, 2012 @ 20:06:25
I really liked Cerys’s shape poem. i like the ending most
Feb 09, 2012 @ 05:17:18
Hi glen hills primary I am Billy from St.Marys Mosgiel.
You shape poems are really cool.
Feb 09, 2012 @ 06:23:16
HI this is Zara from NZ.
I really like all the shape poems that you guys did!
I especially liked Cade’s shape poem about the cube
Were you hungry at that time Cade?!
Feb 09, 2012 @ 19:49:47
Wow! What wonderful poems. Your descriptions are so real I can almost taste the scrumptious donuts, hear the maltesers rattling and see the golden treasure box. Well done everyone.
Feb 09, 2012 @ 19:56:27
Excellent poems!!
Some very creative use of words.
I wonder what shape I would be? a circle i think sometime 🙂
Keep up the good work
Mr Overton
Leicester
Feb 09, 2012 @ 21:47:53
What lovely poems, I read about them on twitter. I like the doughnut in Layton’s poem, and if I were a star I’d be Heston Blumental
Feb 10, 2012 @ 17:41:37
I like cerys because of the clock thing
Feb 11, 2012 @ 21:51:54
I like Anotidas poem about the ice cream and Laytons description about the doughnut.
Feb 12, 2012 @ 00:20:06
i like all of the poems i think they are amazing! well done everyone
Feb 16, 2012 @ 19:47:09
I really like cades poem and laytons well done you two
Feb 20, 2012 @ 22:15:55
Hi i love your shape poems they are amazing. I think i might magpie some of your worderfulwork to show my class at Fagley Primary as good examples. We cover shape poems and calligrams in year 3. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Sutcliffe
Year 3, Fagley Primary School
Feb 21, 2012 @ 17:58:48
I’m glad you like our poems. We have done loads of poetry this year and a lot of it is on the blog. Hope your year 3’s like them too.