More Shape Poems

Here are some more of our Shape poems.

If I were a shape   by Cerys

If I were a shape
I’d be a circle
I’d be a clock ticking away the minutes of the day
I’d be a fan blowing cold air around the room
I’d be a ball rolling down the hill
If I were a circle

I’d be a rectangle
I’d be a table with food on it
I’d be a curtain hanging down the wall
I’d be a book flicking through the pages
If I were a rectangle

But if I were a star

I’d be Rhianna

If I were a shape by Anotida

If I were a shape
I’d be a sphere
I’d be a world cup football when South Africa always win
I’d be a big fat everlasting orange

I’d be a cone
I’d be a delicious melting giant ice cream
I’d be a snow mans coldest carrot nose

But if I were a star
I’d be Akai
The best street dancer


If I was a shape  by Layton

I’d be a circle
Id’ be a scrumptious donut covered in sugar
I’d be a shiny new car wheel on a ferrari
I’d be a Bay Blade spinning in a shiny new stadium

If I were a star
I’d be Justin Bieber


If I were a shape by Cade

If I were a shape
I would be a cube
I’d be a shiny golden treasure box
containing precious jewels
I’d be cardboard box holding a new television
I’d be a red rattling box of Maltesers
disappearing down my tummy
I’d be an RAF lunch box with a chicken sandwich
and a bacon wrap with double bacon coated with macaroni cheese

But If I was a star
I’d be Tom Cruise
in the film Top Gun

If I were a shape by Owen

If I were a shape
I’d be a rectangle
I’d be a computer flashing lights on and off
I’d be a projector shining light low and high
I’d be an old T.V that only has one channel
I’d be lots of booming speakers

If I were a shape
I’d be a circle
I’d be a electric motor going round and round
I’d be a sun burning people
I’d be a clock ticking away
I’d be the world with lots of little people
walking in me

 But if I was a star

I’d be Bruno Mars

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ebony
    Feb 08, 2012 @ 20:06:25

    I really liked Cerys’s shape poem. i like the ending most


  2. billy
    Feb 09, 2012 @ 05:17:18

    Hi glen hills primary I am Billy from St.Marys Mosgiel.
    You shape poems are really cool.


  3. Zara
    Feb 09, 2012 @ 06:23:16

    HI this is Zara from NZ.
    I really like all the shape poems that you guys did!
    I especially liked Cade’s shape poem about the cube
    Were you hungry at that time Cade?!


  4. Jo Badge
    Feb 09, 2012 @ 19:49:47

    Wow! What wonderful poems. Your descriptions are so real I can almost taste the scrumptious donuts, hear the maltesers rattling and see the golden treasure box. Well done everyone.


  5. mrovertonprimary
    Feb 09, 2012 @ 19:56:27

    Excellent poems!!
    Some very creative use of words.
    I wonder what shape I would be? a circle i think sometime 🙂
    Keep up the good work
    Mr Overton


  6. Sarah Lucas
    Feb 09, 2012 @ 21:47:53

    What lovely poems, I read about them on twitter. I like the doughnut in Layton’s poem, and if I were a star I’d be Heston Blumental


  7. Kimberley smith
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 17:41:37

    I like cerys because of the clock thing


  8. shanon
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 21:51:54

    I like Anotidas poem about the ice cream and Laytons description about the doughnut.


  9. Erin Sadler
    Feb 12, 2012 @ 00:20:06

    i like all of the poems i think they are amazing! well done everyone


  10. Erin Sadler
    Feb 16, 2012 @ 19:47:09

    I really like cades poem and laytons well done you two


  11. Mrs Sutcliffe
    Feb 20, 2012 @ 22:15:55

    Hi i love your shape poems they are amazing. I think i might magpie some of your worderfulwork to show my class at Fagley Primary as good examples. We cover shape poems and calligrams in year 3. Keep up the good work.

    Mrs Sutcliffe
    Year 3, Fagley Primary School


    • devoil
      Feb 21, 2012 @ 17:58:48

      I’m glad you like our poems. We have done loads of poetry this year and a lot of it is on the blog. Hope your year 3’s like them too.


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