More Poems

We wrote poems using similes and metaphors for our homework this week.

This is Cades Riddle poem:

What am I?

As fluffy as a pillow

As cuddly as a teddy bear

Eyes black as coal

Fur white as clouds

I can wait quiet as a mouse

Feet as grippy as rubber

And I can swim like a fish

What am I?

Can you guess the subject of Cade’s poem?

This is Hope’s Bat Poem

I swoop through the dark night sky
as if covered with a cloak of invisibility

I seek my quarry without my eyes
like a radar silently seeking a swooping plane

I sleep upside down in a dark, damp cave
that is as dark as a dungeon

I quickly eat my prey
I am a mean, keen flying machine of the sky
I am a sneaky, sly, quick witted animal named ……….

                                                             THE BAT!

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Kimberley smith
    Sep 14, 2011 @ 15:55:26

    the blog is very good and I liked hopes writing because she used lots of adjectives and yes this is Kimberley who is the class of 5JDV this is a amazing blog and thank you for reading my message.

    Kimberley smith


  2. shanon wilkins
    Sep 14, 2011 @ 19:40:28

    i think mrs Deviol has done a good job on this from shanon


  3. shanon
    Sep 15, 2011 @ 06:16:12

    this blog is very good i liked cades because you have to work it out and i like hopes beacause i like how shes written everything then put at the end the bat

    is cades a bear

    from shanon


  4. Finley Howell
    Sep 15, 2011 @ 07:09:19

    I think cades and hopes poems are both realy good so id give them both an 10/10
    i hope you put up more poems .
    this is fin from the awsome 5JDV


  5. Eleanor Maidstone
    Sep 16, 2011 @ 16:51:23

    I think this is a great website because it is so good I will give it an 11/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you put up more things in the future
    this is Eleanor from the amazing 5JDV,Bye.


  6. Eleanor Maidstone
    Sep 16, 2011 @ 16:58:49

    I think Cade’s poem is a dog


  7. Reece Latham
    Sep 19, 2011 @ 15:36:40

    is it a polar bear cade


  8. Reece Latham
    Sep 19, 2011 @ 15:37:38

    10 out of 10 out standing


  9. Carrie Hall
    Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:24:13

    i really like hopes poem because it has lots of similes


  10. Ebony Martin
    Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:52:16

    I really like these poems and riddles i hope you keep putting more on. I espiecally like Hopes bat poem.

    Ebony Martin


  11. Ebony Martin
    Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:53:59

    I think cade is a white fluffy dog


  12. Erin Sadler
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 15:25:08

    it think Cades is a polar bear and i really like hopes bat poem but i am still thinking what carries is?


  13. Erin Sadler
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 15:29:22

    i would give this blog a 100/100!!! wow


  14. Eleanor Maidstone
    Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:49:45

    I am going on draw a it’s tremendous!!!!!!!!!!!


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