We wrote poems using similes and metaphors for our homework this week.
This is Cades Riddle poem:
What am I?
As fluffy as a pillow
As cuddly as a teddy bear
Eyes black as coal
Fur white as clouds
I can wait quiet as a mouse
Feet as grippy as rubber
And I can swim like a fish
What am I?
Can you guess the subject of Cade’s poem?
This is Hope’s Bat Poem
I swoop through the dark night sky
as if covered with a cloak of invisibility
I seek my quarry without my eyes
like a radar silently seeking a swooping plane
I sleep upside down in a dark, damp cave
that is as dark as a dungeon
I quickly eat my prey
I am a mean, keen flying machine of the sky
I am a sneaky, sly, quick witted animal named ……….
THE BAT!
Sep 14, 2011 @ 15:55:26
the blog is very good and I liked hopes writing because she used lots of adjectives and yes this is Kimberley who is the class of 5JDV this is a amazing blog and thank you for reading my message.
Kimberley smith
Sep 14, 2011 @ 19:40:28
i think mrs Deviol has done a good job on this from shanon
Sep 15, 2011 @ 06:16:12
this blog is very good i liked cades because you have to work it out and i like hopes beacause i like how shes written everything then put at the end the bat
is cades a bear
from shanon
Sep 15, 2011 @ 07:09:19
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i hope you put up more poems .
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Sep 16, 2011 @ 16:58:49
I think Cade’s poem is a dog
Sep 19, 2011 @ 15:36:40
is it a polar bear cade
Sep 19, 2011 @ 15:37:38
10 out of 10 out standing
Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:24:13
i really like hopes poem because it has lots of similes
Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:52:16
I really like these poems and riddles i hope you keep putting more on. I espiecally like Hopes bat poem.
Ebony Martin
Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:54:19
You do like Hopes don’t you!!!
Sep 19, 2011 @ 18:53:59
I think cade is a white fluffy dog
Sep 21, 2011 @ 15:25:08
it think Cades is a polar bear and i really like hopes bat poem but i am still thinking what carries is?
Sep 21, 2011 @ 15:29:22
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